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My in-depth and honest review

It had some slightly funny things in it, but you really need to turn up the sound quality in flash when you export it. That way it'll sound much better. I had trouble understanding some bits. I really liked your menu thingy, though it was a little misleading. I've gotta say that your "author comments" were a little misleading as well. But it looks like you can work with flash pretty well, so I'd love to see some real flashy goodness from you! Just, try and make something not so spammy xD.

TheThirdSix responds:

Thank you for your review. The point was to make it very misleading. Yes, I can work with Flash very well; I've been using it for about four years now. Again, thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts, and thanks for watching!

Yay! Good =)

This was good, especially for your first flash! Good music, though maybe you should have turned up the quality a little? And I'm a little bored with stick figure fights, so it'd be cool if you move up to better things one day, but this one still looked very good and played pretty smoothly. The humor was good too, because pure fighting can get a little boring xD. You look like you are going to become a great flash animator. Good luck, and keep animating!

EpicNinja123 responds:

thank you aqlex. i really wanted to turn up the uality but the bad sound quality after exporting it is what bugs me the most. i don't know how to make it any better. in the raw Actionscript 3.0 file, the sound quality is fantastic. crisp. i chose the most high quality sounding effects to use. i can't really do anything about that except make it as a youtube video. i have the youtube video of this in my profile. the sound quality there is as sharp as my mom's words while lecturing me :P

Not bad.

I like the youtube video, and this wasn't a bad animated version of it. I think your animation could still use a little work, though, because it was a little rough, but other than that, nice job!

quitestupid responds:

thanks man! probably the most helpful review yet

Animation wasn't bad...

But it was really short, and it could have used a preloader. Keep practicing, and try to make your stuff a little longer and more complex =)

diochi responds:

I have better vids thier just the wrong format(they all .WMV)
The problem is I don't use flash I use Photoshop and Movie Maker.
The only reason I was able to upload this was because of this file converter I used.

Pretty funny

I liked the animation style, it looked pretty nice. I wouldn't mind some more detailed backgrounds, and maybe some longer animations, but I liked the ending. Endings always seem like important parts of animations to me, because that's how one remembers the animation from then on. I'd love to see some longer and more complex animations if you've got any coming!

jabzinaut responds:

Thanks! The reason I didnt go all out with this toon, animation/background/etc.-wise, was I wanted to keep with the simple-style as I did with my older IB toons. I have more coming that will look more appealing to the eye though!

Funny, but needs work

Your animation was funny, but you need to work on some things. The animation could be a little bit smoother, but it was nice. There were a few parts which could have been more varied, such as the background when the human-stick is running. One thing I think you need to work on is your audio! To get rid of the p-popping effect, you can try and turn the mic away from your mouth and speak a little to the side of it so the air from your P's doesn't fly into the mic. Another good method is to get some stockings and put them around a coat-hanger, and then speak through that into the mic. The stockings will catch most of the annoying air. I hope that it'll help, at least a little bit.

Brewster responds:

That was helpful thanks

Cool idea.

The idea was cool, and you should definitely remake this when you learn more flash. I think you need to use a few less tweens and some more Frame-By-Frame drawings.

maja2 responds:

ok i will try

I am Alex. I make films and animations. Will my stuff be awesome? Hell no, but who cares?! Nobody, that's who. </rant>. Current Project: Tablet

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