Your new style looks like crappy deviant art anime. I'd keep experimenting before settling on a style. Also the motion blur when there is slow arm movement is unnecessary. Also anatomy, study it.
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Haha don't worry, this isn't my new style. I really just wanted to try something different from my usual style, but I'll be returning to it shortly. I did actually remove the motion blur on the slowest arm movement, but I do agree that I should have cut it out further. I did have classes on anatomy and drawing, but when it comes to animation, I just don't want to listen to those rules =P. I like having everything be able to listen to its own rules, which is one of the things I love about the freedom of animation. All the rules of real life, I get to listen to those when I'm working with Film.
MistyE
The character designs could use a little more work, but they were pretty good overall. The frame-by-frame animation was very smooth, it wasn't very funny though. If you could come up with better writing, you would produce amazing cartoons.
Aqlex
Thank you, I always try and go for smoothness! I agree, the script wasn't anything amazing. This was actually more of an experiment in animation than the story, but I have scripts I'm much happier with that I hope to work with in the future.