My in-depth and honest review
It had some slightly funny things in it, but you really need to turn up the sound quality in flash when you export it. That way it'll sound much better. I had trouble understanding some bits. I really liked your menu thingy, though it was a little misleading. I've gotta say that your "author comments" were a little misleading as well. But it looks like you can work with flash pretty well, so I'd love to see some real flashy goodness from you! Just, try and make something not so spammy xD.