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Well, I failed to enjoy this masterpiece.

Why is there such bad stuff in judgment today? This thing had horrible art, it had no preloader, it had no story, and the animation was mostly tweened and just awful. Please put some more effort into your flashes =).

That sucked...

Please include a preloader next time, as it just loops this way. I could see the humor that you had, but the animation that went along with it wasn't any good. You need to work on that, and I'm sure you could be creating better things one day, because you do have some good ideas there.

What the heck is this?

Um, well I'm not surprised that this was deleted. There was nothing redeeming here: there was no story, there is nothing funny, the art is horrible...At least it was pretty short. Please put some effort into your flashes in the future.

Good

It had a funny idea behind it, and it was pretty well animated. Though, the payoff seems a little underwhelming, but it's certainly not what I was expecting xD. Work on longer and more complex stories, and your stuff's gonna be awesome!

I have to agree with the guy at the end...

although I really like the art, and the sound quality on the last guy at least. It's just that...I don't really get what's happening, and although the end seemed to start to take it somewhere else, it didn't really make up for it. I see that you're pretty dang good with Flash though, so I'm looking forward to seeing something better soon!

What is this..?

While what you have there LOOKS good, that's about it. There is nothing here. It just shows pictures of mountains, and it takes a while to get to those pictures at that. This doesn't even show how mountains are formed? Use those flash skills for something (to quote a student at my school) more..better. Maybe add some audio next time?

Good idea, but..

One major problem with this is that is has no preloader, so it just sits on a blank screen for a while, and you think that's it. Also, when it ends, it just restarts, and continues to play the song from before AS WELL as starting it over again, which gets really annoying. Please use a preloader next time =).

HomerSexual responds:

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I liked it =)

It had pretty good timing, I liked the drawing and animation, and I liked the way you did the preloader. The only thing I'd work on it the sound effects and voices. The mic you were using seemed a little low quality and it was kinda hard to understand. If you'd invest in a better mic, I'm sure it would greatly improve the quality =). Also, I think you could probably find a pretty good bus zooming by sound effect on the internet if you looked hard enough. Maybe try sounddogs.com?

Teschke responds:

Thanks,I find your Comment Helpful this flash was created to help me under stand what I need to improve on. Also thax for the link...

It looks okay so far...

But it's a little slow. It takes a while for those meteors to start showering down on the land. Also, the fact that all the impacts look identical is a little off putting, but other than that, it looks pretty good and plays okay so far.

Need work...

This animation showed that you have a pretty good knowledge of how to work flash, and it had some original and funny bits to it, but it was honestly too short, and didn't really have much of a story or punchline. Make something with more of a story, and I think it'll be pretty good =).

I am Alex. I make films and animations. Will my stuff be awesome? Hell no, but who cares?! Nobody, that's who. </rant>. Current Project: Tablet

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