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Awesome

The voiceacting was great, the animation was great (those characters looked really good), and the joke was funny. I only wish it had more! I've been waiting for some kind of good Inception flash, and finally we got one. Got any more? xD

Not bad.

I like the youtube video, and this wasn't a bad animated version of it. I think your animation could still use a little work, though, because it was a little rough, but other than that, nice job!

quitestupid responds:

thanks man! probably the most helpful review yet

Animation wasn't bad...

But it was really short, and it could have used a preloader. Keep practicing, and try to make your stuff a little longer and more complex =)

diochi responds:

I have better vids thier just the wrong format(they all .WMV)
The problem is I don't use flash I use Photoshop and Movie Maker.
The only reason I was able to upload this was because of this file converter I used.

Pretty funny

I liked the animation style, it looked pretty nice. I wouldn't mind some more detailed backgrounds, and maybe some longer animations, but I liked the ending. Endings always seem like important parts of animations to me, because that's how one remembers the animation from then on. I'd love to see some longer and more complex animations if you've got any coming!

jabzinaut responds:

Thanks! The reason I didnt go all out with this toon, animation/background/etc.-wise, was I wanted to keep with the simple-style as I did with my older IB toons. I have more coming that will look more appealing to the eye though!

Very awesome.

This was great. I have seen too many stick figure fights though, and they're a little stale, but this one had a unique animation style that was very nice to watch and it had some original stuff, but it was still a stick fight at the base. I think you should do some more complex things, but this was still awesome xD!

Funny, but needs work

Your animation was funny, but you need to work on some things. The animation could be a little bit smoother, but it was nice. There were a few parts which could have been more varied, such as the background when the human-stick is running. One thing I think you need to work on is your audio! To get rid of the p-popping effect, you can try and turn the mic away from your mouth and speak a little to the side of it so the air from your P's doesn't fly into the mic. Another good method is to get some stockings and put them around a coat-hanger, and then speak through that into the mic. The stockings will catch most of the annoying air. I hope that it'll help, at least a little bit.

Brewster responds:

That was helpful thanks

I liked it, but...

I actually liked it, but it lacks a few things. First of all, put a preloader on. It's courteous and makes sure the video doesn't keep looping. 2nd, that Sparta sound clip was very quiet; maybe you should have taken Audacity and amped it up a little bit. It was also a little on the sort side, but I liked the humor the animation wasn't bad.

Amazing.

I don't know how anyone could possibly improve this video. It is at maximum awesome. The ending is hilarious too. The only part I didn't really get was when he was drinking the water. Most animals kinda...suck the water in, but he just shoved his whole mouth in there. But I'm not complaining! It was awesome anyway. I loved the link to the camera and swarming effects you gave too. Very helpful!

Holy crap...

this and your other Brackenwood videos may just be the best Flash videos ever made. I wish I could put in 1/10th the amount of detail that you put in. I watched waterlollies first, but then I went and checked out your other Brackenwood videos and they're all amazing. Keep making videos, dude.

Amazing.

This is good, VERY well animated and written. The only thing is the end seems a little...unendy. Does the whole thing end with nothing really happening, just a scary guy who is just as scared? Do they get a ride?

I am Alex. I make films and animations. Will my stuff be awesome? Hell no, but who cares?! Nobody, that's who. </rant>. Current Project: Tablet

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