Aqlex's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Entertainment]

Nice =)

I really liked this. The voicing was pretty good, though it had a few moments where it sounded a little fuzzy, but the idea behind it was good, and the animation behind it was good. I am wondering why it has an Adult Only rating though?

akoRn responds:

idk.. i only made the violence as mild.. usually it appear as Teen.. =.="

[2 Worlds 1 Cup]

Fairly funny...

The dialogue was funny, but the fact that it wasn't a flash is annoying. Save that for youtube xD. Also, it seemed kinda quiet to me.

[the side effects of pivot]

Um...Pretty good

For a pivot, it was pretty good, but the problem is that this has already been done many times, and in better ways. But besides that issue, this was decently animated, and I'm sure the more you practice, the better you will become =). Keep animating!

[Lost Puppy]

Haha not bad.

I didn't notice a preloader though? But anyway, the animation looked pretty good, though I'd add a little more detail and maybe smooth it out a little. The music was really good for setting the "lost puppy" mood. Also, the scene at the end where we get to see what the dog was really doing, I think it was going a little too fast and could have had a little more work and detail put into it. But the concept was good and a lot of the work was good as well. Keep it up =)

[Gump 01 - Momma Said]

Not...too bad..

The art wasn't bad, and there was a joke there. Unfortunately, the whole thing was too short, and I had a little trouble understanding the guy. I think you have the ability to make something good though, so keep practicing and submit something longer when you get the chance =).

[i want my wallet]

THAT was 9.3 mb...?

Well, it looks like you can use Flash to some degree, so I think you can get pretty good as long as you keep practicing. It'd be great if you moved up from stick figures, though. Now, my MAIN problem with this is the fact that it is 9.3 mb. This file should be...maybe 1 mb MAX! I don't know how you managed this, but I have a feeling it might be your audio. Read this tutorial, please: http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view /433864
take out any extra spaces that may have been added to that address.

[rhubarb]

My in-depth and honest review

It had some slightly funny things in it, but you really need to turn up the sound quality in flash when you export it. That way it'll sound much better. I had trouble understanding some bits. I really liked your menu thingy, though it was a little misleading. I've gotta say that your "author comments" were a little misleading as well. But it looks like you can work with flash pretty well, so I'd love to see some real flashy goodness from you! Just, try and make something not so spammy xD.

TheThirdSix responds:

Thank you for your review. The point was to make it very misleading. Yes, I can work with Flash very well; I've been using it for about four years now. Again, thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts, and thanks for watching!

[Impulse: Father and Son]

Yay! Good =)

This was good, especially for your first flash! Good music, though maybe you should have turned up the quality a little? And I'm a little bored with stick figure fights, so it'd be cool if you move up to better things one day, but this one still looked very good and played pretty smoothly. The humor was good too, because pure fighting can get a little boring xD. You look like you are going to become a great flash animator. Good luck, and keep animating!

EpicNinja123 responds:

thank you aqlex. i really wanted to turn up the uality but the bad sound quality after exporting it is what bugs me the most. i don't know how to make it any better. in the raw Actionscript 3.0 file, the sound quality is fantastic. crisp. i chose the most high quality sounding effects to use. i can't really do anything about that except make it as a youtube video. i have the youtube video of this in my profile. the sound quality there is as sharp as my mom's words while lecturing me :P

[The Justin Bieber Show]

I liked it, but...

it was missing something in my opinion. There weren't really any actual Justin Bieber jokes...it could easily have been the Adam Sandler show or the Leonardo DiCraprio show. The animation looked awesome though, and it was still humorous, though a little short. Keep up the good work =)